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Mr Piano Man

By manjoy
Grass sculpture at the President's Palace, Malta

Tags: Sculpture Plants Flowers and plants

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NEWMANP Plus
8 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
13 Apr 2011 9:37PM
hello
i could see the attraction of the subject, the difficulty here is isolating the subject from its surroundings to make it stand out and impose itself as a principle feature.

maybe a different viewpoint or a ground level view may have pushed it against the sky or other but here im losing the contours against other garden features and people. maybe a really wide aperature and a shallow depth of field may have pushed the background into blur.

so although i see what you were attempting, and boldly bringing the sculpture into the foreground im sorry to say i dont think it works totally as a composition.

the exposure and relative sharpness and colour are all fine.

best regards
Phil

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paulbroad Plus
9 123 1106 United Kingdom
13 Apr 2011 11:46PM
A good try, and difficult to see how to improve. Could you get a very low viewpoint to make the main image stand out from the background. That is the problem here - you need very limited depth, or a lower viewpoint.

Paul

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