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Sea of Tranquility

By manjoy
Calm seas at Ramla l-Hamra, Gozo

Tags: Landscape and travel

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Paintman Plus
9 1.1k 177 United Kingdom
30 Apr 2011 8:48AM
I think the photo lacks contrast and a real focal point. The large rock seems to be that point but it's not large enough in the image. In trying to include everything the photo's impact is reduced. If you try to compose the shot thinking 'how can I simplify the elements within the viewfinder and still get my message across', then you'll have an image with more power for the viewer.

The mod has increased contrast and colour and is also sharpened.

The scene probably needs better or more dramatic lighting to realize its full potential.

Alan.

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