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Figures in the Sun

By martynj  
Figures walking in the sun in Soho, New York.

Do you think the cobbles and cracks in the foreground distract from the main composition? Any other comments appreciated.

Thanks.

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: ron thomas, ericfaragh, KBan and 6 more


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ericfaragh 17 149 5 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2006 1:15PM
I'd be inclined to crop up to remove the cobbles. Might go well in bw too.
KBan 15 512 4 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2006 1:25PM
as above a tighter crop and B&W
kEITH
noseprints 17 576
7 Jan 2006 1:35PM
works really well. i love the corner of cobblestone in it. kind of punctuates it for me.
sheilac 16 162 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2006 2:13PM
I would crop off the bikes from the left and the cobbles from the bottom. This would leave a clean and simpler image. The flare suits the image. Well captured.
martynj 17 21
7 Jan 2006 2:39PM
Thanks all for your suggestions. I've now experimented with tighter crops and find that about 2cm off the bottom and 1cm off the right suits my eye. Tried BW but I quite like the reds in the colour version.
mikesavage 18 299 2 England
7 Jan 2006 3:48PM
Nicely observed & good exposure too. Click!

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