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By GermeijsRonald    
recent picture of Hannah getting older ... Smile it has been a few years since i took a picture

Tags: General Close-up and macro Portraits and people

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rontear Plus
14 8 8 England
24 Nov 2012 1:34PM
Growing up before your eyes !! Ronald.

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parob 6 3 74 France
24 Nov 2012 2:26PM
Beautiful portrait! You wanted to focus on the eyes, it is evident, but I must say you a also managed to capture a tenderness that seems to infuse the entire shot. Changing anything here would more than likely detract from what you wanted to achieve. Kudos. Paul
paulbroad 9 123 1161 United Kingdom
24 Nov 2012 2:52PM
Very pleasant nicely cropped portrait with considerable merit. Wonder if the eyes could be a little sharper and you give us no exposure infot. Looks a bit cool. I like this type of portrait slightly warm even if not entirely accurate. Lift the yellow and red channels just a touch.

banehawi Plus
13 1.6k 3681 Canada
24 Nov 2012 4:51PM
A very attractive shot. I love the diagonal presentation, works well.

Colour temp is too cool for sure, - needs to be warmer, and her eyes can be a lot sharper, - Im sure the original is sharp, probably just compression caused detail loss.

Ive uploaded a mod to show what I mean,


Coleslaw 12 13.4k 28 Wales
24 Nov 2012 10:14PM
Wow, it has been such a long time, Ron!!!!!!
Your photos were once my inspiration, so I am glad you are back.
parob 6 3 74 France
25 Nov 2012 11:32AM
Back again with a mod in which I tried to preserve the blue-green of the eyes. Added a gentle S-curve, then tweaked the colour balance, specifically the blue channel, -21 highlights and -31 midtones. I think my skin-tones are a bit too yellow, I wonder. I measured my RBG as 240, 233, 207. I see a strong colour cast on the original shot. It vanishes on the mods. Recently upgraded my graphic card to quadro fx 1800, then calibrated my monitor with my i1 display pro. Am I still having colour problems? What do you think?
Robert51 8 7 45 United Kingdom
27 Nov 2012 12:03AM
Great picture and just love those eyes.

I have upload a mod where I gave the image a high key effect and then warmed it up a bit. Hope you like it.


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