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Fruit

By mohanramyaa
This was actually the first picture I ever took on my DSLR! Was quite pleased at the timeSmile Please leave any comments Grin critique ?

Tags: Fruit Close-up and macro

Voters: Toger, KarenFB, pluckyfilly and 2 more


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KarenFB Plus
10 4.7k 167 England
19 Jan 2013 3:42PM
I love the colours, a lovely warm glow.

I think I would be tempted to crop off the left hand side (to remove the blue light), but that is just a personal opinion and probably just me! Smile

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19 Jan 2013 3:44PM
Haha, thanks again Smile
pluckyfilly Plus
10 351 33 United Kingdom
27 Jan 2013 8:53PM
Agree it has a nice glow and as a first picture one can't expect the work of a pro just a little too much out of focus for my liking ramyaa but don't be put off by my comment as your doing fine now and some of my first shots I was pleased with but looking back now realise they are not great, just keep going and enjoy - that's what it's all aboutWink
jamestheboy 6 447 5 United Kingdom
27 Jan 2013 10:24PM
Like the colours in this one






james Smile
cats_123 Plus
12 4.5k 26 Northern Ireland
28 Jan 2013 9:02AM
there's a little bit of distraction in the bg and although having the whole bowl in frame is nice, I wonder whether a crop on the left might help isolate the in focus fruit Smile
28 Jan 2013 11:46AM
thank you everyone Smile
pluckyfilly Plus
10 351 33 United Kingdom
28 Jan 2013 3:28PM

Quote:There's a little bit of distraction in the bg and although having the whole bowl in frame is nice, I wonder whether a crop on the left might help isolate the in focus fruit Smile
came back for a second look and agree with the quoted statement ramyaa, sometimes it needs a second look to appreciate the end productSmile
28 Jan 2013 6:58PM
ok thank you ann! Smile

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