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NEWMANP Plus
7 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
22 May 2011 9:45PM
hello
a great subject taken is super evening light i guess as i can see the reflection of the setting sun on the far bank.

i like the way the boat is forming the foreground full of interesting characters and i am sure it would have been most interesting to us to read more about the ceremony taking place with the figures on the boat and cycle.

i am a little unsure about the placing of the cycle and gentleman on the bank as this is taking my eye from the boat which is the main interest, maybe the cycle is adding just one element too many.

i also would have liked to have seen just a little more space around the boat particularly at each end to make sure the ends were not clipped off.

id like to have been there to have a shot at this myself, well seen and i look forward to your next upload, (i found your previous 2 uploads very interesting and creative )

regards
Phil

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paulbroad 8 108 986 United Kingdom
23 May 2011 7:49AM
I assume this is a camera phone. You needed a bit better lighting as this is a touch nder exposed. Spot metering? Not sure a camera phone would have that but it says so. Get a bit more in at the bottom and less at the top. The subject matter could be very interesting.

Paul

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