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draxwayze 12 74
18 Apr 2006 2:16AM
Pin sharp and good eye contact. The eyes have it. Nice one.

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18 Apr 2006 2:16AM
well composed


Michal
18 Apr 2006 2:16AM
Warm colours work well, she has a slightly startled expression though.
onewildworld 13 696 4 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2006 2:22AM
Technically it's fine, but she looks a bit scared and her arm positions look like she's been pinned down - this ties in with the startled expression!

The composition works well for the shapes she's creating, but for me, the expression kills it.

Dave
MoWiz Plus
10 114 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2006 2:25AM
Thanks for the feed back, she did struggle a little with expression, but generally did very well for her first shoot, we have another shoot coming up and hopefully her confidence will be better.
User_Removed 12 39 6 Scotland
18 Apr 2006 2:41AM
Is she surrendering to your photographic charms Mo LOL. Fine shot my friend of a lovely model.

Take care victor
Kim Walton Plus
12 145 30 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2006 2:42AM
Great shot mo,well lit,nice pose.
JouŠo Plus
11 56 Finland
18 Apr 2006 2:50AM
Hello, MO!

You are going PRO I see...

Another superb shot, my friend...

Keep them coming...

Jouko
tull 12 181 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2006 2:55AM
Her expression is fine with me Mo she just has that kinda look about her,excellent shot my friend.

Mark.
18 Apr 2006 3:20AM
Yes, like the eye contact, great shot.
Richard
Jasbe Plus
10 116 England
18 Apr 2006 4:51AM
Great shot Mo, lovely model and pose, (where were you, suspended above her,LOL)
Jason
User_Removed 10 32 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2006 5:39AM
Sper shot Mo. I love the pose

Jeff
vparmar 11 7 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2006 5:47AM
yep i like her expression too - had to study for a while before i made this comment - love the pose and eye contact

vinny
Rock Plus
13 10 2 England
18 Apr 2006 6:14AM
Mo,
The shot is very good and the "pose" is what you can expect from a young, first time , model
The lighting and background help the shot.
Rock
A Booth 13 11 4 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2006 6:18AM
well posed image of a beautiful girl - I am not sure about the skin tone colours around the face Mo. (PS someone is copying your name and style on the net model site!!).
vismaya 10 Ireland
18 Apr 2006 8:11AM
Excellent lighting and skin tones- lovely shot!
18 Apr 2006 8:38AM
A good clear image. She looks a bit scared or unrelaxed somehow.
arnieg Plus
11 691 England
18 Apr 2006 8:53AM
good image mo looks like you have mastered portaits to go along with the rest of your talents behined the camera

arnie
plugin 11 1 Canada
18 Apr 2006 8:57AM
Great shot Mo!
Jim
thorn Plus
11 124 2 Scotland
18 Apr 2006 8:58AM
Hi Mo,Top class work,excellent eyes,detail,clarity,tones and presentation.Take care.AnnSmile
MalcolmS Plus
10 1.1k 13 England
18 Apr 2006 9:31AM
NIcely presented shot Mo

Malcolm
Nigel_95 Plus
10 260 2 United Kingdom
18 Apr 2006 10:23AM
Good lighting and really lovely eyes. However, I agree with other comments regarding the pose and expression.

Nigel
18 Apr 2006 12:23PM
superb shot Mo Well composed

Steve
MarkT Plus
11 119 2 England
18 Apr 2006 12:25PM
Great shot and like the pose and expression.

Mark.
18 Apr 2006 3:49PM
Mo a very nice sensual capture with beautiful skin tone captured!

stay well
tonymarq
sputnki Plus
11 10 Canada
18 Apr 2006 5:10PM
Eh, what can I say Mo? I take pictures of birchbark and train tracks!

Looks good to me!

Doug
glazzaro Plus
11 70 23 United States
18 Apr 2006 8:57PM
Nice lighting highlights on the skin, gives it such a healthy feel to it, nice camera work. Spot on! Click!!!

Greg
chase Plus
10 1.1k 246 England
18 Apr 2006 11:45PM
Nice lighting Mo,good eye contact too,she looks a little 'static' but that will possibly be improved next time Mo,as her nerves seem to be jangling a little on this one.Anyway I'm no expert in this field !
Janet
Cat&Mouse 12 109 Russian Federation
19 Apr 2006 2:24AM
Wonderful idea, nice composition and lighting.
Great work in PS, especially for background.
Nice to meet with your great studio works, Mo!

Something new for you... Wink

Malik & Mary.
jan 1 Plus
11 12 Netherlands
19 Apr 2006 6:52AM
It looks she surender with hands up.
Jan
19 Apr 2006 11:45AM
A lovely shot Mo. Great lighting

Hawk
denka Plus
11 7 Finland
22 Apr 2006 1:47AM
I like how she almoust bends from the right bottom into the middle and her face expression tells a intresting story.

denka
Wooly 10 112 4 England
22 Apr 2006 9:30PM
Another great shot Mo, looks like a shot from a Bond movie flyer.

Alan
Leo 14 46 9 England
23 Apr 2006 12:15AM
I like this the best of the ones you've posted Mo, I don't mind the expression but perhaps if she had her head turned a _little_ more towards the lens, maybe that would look better? Hindsight is a wonderful thing with glamour work...LOL
You're really getting to grips with some excellent work in this fieldSmile

Cheers..Leo
panda 11 5 1 England
23 Apr 2006 9:37AM
Looks as if she is surrendering -- yes please!!. Like the lighting and the sparkly bra.

Phil
foxybrown 10 368
24 Apr 2006 6:41AM
oooh hello mel, nice top you'll look better without itWink
ginz04 11 281 18 United Kingdom
24 Apr 2006 9:04AM
love the angle and pose really works well.

ian
24 Apr 2006 10:15AM
Read all the comments as a study in what is expected in the model and the pic. (I haven't a clue myself.) Looks fine, would love to try this someday.

Verne

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