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By mrberry
shot on helston river cornwal, two girls waiting for the ferry boat

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: brian1208, autarky, ngeeves

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brian1208 18 11.8k 12 United Kingdom
26 Sep 2004 6:08PM
A real narrative image that invites the viewer to create the story. Nicely shot,

autarky 17 339
26 Sep 2004 6:19PM
Intriguing and a little sad. I don't want to start another critique war on ephotozine but could I suggest with the utmost politeness and feeling of goodwill that you try cloning out the two distracting dark reflections above the girls' heads, and see if it strengthens the image in your opinion, by concentrating attention more on the girls' faces? A very good candid picture of a kind that is too rare.
Best wishes, Gordon
mrberry 17 14 Australia
26 Sep 2004 7:21PM
thank you both for your helpful comments.
I do agree with your point gordon -only recently have I started to use digital and still havent brought myself to adjust any shots I take - I suppose my mindset is a little fixed on leaving things alone.
elowes 17 2.8k United Kingdom
26 Sep 2004 8:12PM
ngeeves 18 118 United Kingdom
27 Sep 2004 7:30AM
I like this although I agree with Gordon about the dark reflections, this picture (had we not been told that two girls were waiting for the ferry boat) could be 2 girls who have just had an disagreement, there are many more thing that can be read into this picture which to me makes it a good picture Smile

Well done



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