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Dreaming In Outer Space

By MrDennis
OLYMPUS DIGITAL CAMERA OM-D1 Mk2--12-50mm lens.

I have had this in the Critique section the last few days. May I say, Thank You for critiquing this for me.

I have taken some points on and shortened the neck a bit and taken the Blue away from the neck. I must say, I do like it even more now.
I Hope others will like also..

Seeing as I am New to Digital Creative even though I'm 72, I will post some more in Critique soon. I Love critique Good or Bad as to me, that is the way to learn.

Dennis.

Tags: Head Digital art Painted lady

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1 Feb 2020 11:38PM
I think this is a decorative piece of abstract art Dennis!
I like both colors and composition. Good work!

Arne

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mrswoolybill Plus
13 1.9k 2166 United Kingdom
2 Feb 2020 9:07AM
This is subtly improved, well done and thanks for taking the ideas on board. Shortening the neck places the eyes proportionally at a more comfortable level for the viewer, and the colours are now more harmonious.
Looking forward to seeing you in the critique Gallery again!
Regards,
Moira
dudler Plus
16 1.1k 1599 England
2 Feb 2020 10:27AM
The world keeps changing... It took me a long time to understand that whatever anyone says - good, bad, or away from the point - it's all information, and I can choose to use it or ignore it, and to react to it, or respond thoughtfully.

The world is moving away from that approach now, and is the worse for it: knee-jerks don't make things better, and diplomacy by Twitter is a nonsense.

So it's nice to see the result of someone taking in information, and responding thoughtfully. If only politics could follow art...
chase Plus
14 1.4k 325 England
2 Feb 2020 10:39AM
Well done Dennis, it's always good to see something based on some of the Critique Gallery comments.
The improvements are really good.
dark_lord Plus
16 2.5k 632 England
2 Feb 2020 4:24PM
Thank you for your comment Dennis. I look forward to more of your work.
2 Feb 2020 7:53PM
Good that you like what you have taken on board. This is much better, and it's all about the placement of "those" eyes.
MrDennis 10 271 Wales
2 Feb 2020 10:18PM
Thank You ALL for your very kind comments.--Appreciated..

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