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Elephants at the river

By netsukekoi
My 1st attempt at a panorama. Suggestions appreciated.

Tags: Digitally manipulated Landscape and travel Wildlife and nature

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CathR 14 151 564 United Kingdom
18 May 2009 11:18AM
You have got the technique working fine Martin. The elephants are a bit bunched over to one side though and there is not a great deal happening on the right hand side of the pic. For a successful panorama I feel there has to be interest throughout the shot. I would have moved the elephants to be more central in the shot. I realise this is contrary to my usual advice of placing elements over to one side but here I think there is just too much empty space on the right.

I have uploaded a mod where I have cropped off the right hand portion to show you what it might look like.

Regards

Catherine
netsukekoi 14 57 United Kingdom
18 May 2009 1:30PM
Thanks Catherine - that looks better (I did ask the elephants to spread out a bit but....)

8-)
JMB 12 21
26 Aug 2009 2:39PM
Yes frame it and place it on your wall! I would have had the group towards the right of frame as most are facing left. Great effort and good shot. JMB

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