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Still Life 1

By ngeeves
Finally I am back after 2 years in the wilderness now I am playing with still life I would love to hear your comments and suggestions on how this photo can be improved

Tags: Specialist and abstract

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LynneJoyce Plus
13 22 101 United Kingdom
11 Aug 2008 2:07PM
Gruesome but clever.
11 Aug 2008 2:11PM
I adore this photo, everything is perfect.

Even the title displayed at the top of the page, well thought.

Well done
randomrubble 17 3.1k 12 United Kingdom
11 Aug 2008 2:12PM
I think it's a touch flat, I's like to see more modelling on the centre of the book, where the pages come out and on the 'blood' * oozing of the left.

*quotes justified I hope!
bombebit 13 22 Denmark
11 Aug 2008 3:50PM
that is a right in the eye picture... a play with a light source on one side or both at the back might give it more 'depth' - the idea is excellent..
ngeeves 18 118 United Kingdom
11 Aug 2008 4:31PM
Thanks for your comments I have taken onboard several ideas and will be playing with the lighting Smile
krissyohme 13 1 United Kingdom
12 Aug 2008 3:37PM
This is disguisting!!! But it's so amazaing!Smile

A shorter knife would of been better,maybe you should try that?
Great shot! (like i said)
15 Aug 2008 5:57PM
Hmm.
my dad is a crazy man haha.
and as you can see i will follow
Hahahahaha
Add Me As A Friend Daddyy!,
i don't know how you do it. Sad
By the way, i like the photo..
in a werid way :/
dasantillo 16 231 1 Wales
15 Aug 2008 7:36PM
I think it is a little bit flat, it's needs a touch of depth. Would you be able to experiment with the knife sticking into the book, as if it had been stabbed? You could then also try experimenting with blood running down the blade to the book or make it look like the book is bleeding.
ngeeves 18 118 United Kingdom
15 Aug 2008 8:07PM
Thank Dan for your comments
I am planning to stab the book with a smaller knife and play around quite a bit with the blood and lighting hopefully in the next day or two look out for a newer version of this picture.
PatriciaWilson 17 617 58 Greece
17 Sep 2008 9:40AM
Good to see you back!
Think it's a great idea but perhaps could have a little more atmosphere. Did a mod, hope you like it.
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