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Loving Barcelona VERSION II

By niamh  
Posted a cropped version of this photo from an engagement session a few days back, but wasn't 100% happy with it.

Received some very helpful comments on it (bike works, bike doesn't work, and so on) and would love to see crop alternatives other creative minds on Ephotozine might come up with.

So if you're inspired, please have a go!

Thanks in advance.

Tags: Fashion Wedding and social Portraits and people

Voters: riprap007, RickCar, GalleryGirl and 25 more


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Comments


GalleryGirl 9 4 2 United Kingdom
27 Aug 2009 1:11PM
I like the inclusion of the bike but would have liked it to be a little closer perhaps to the couple or vice versa. Not always possible.

Marilyn x

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27 Aug 2009 1:22PM
like it a lot.....but would have loved if the couple had a bigger part of the frame
niamh 12 34 United Kingdom
27 Aug 2009 1:30PM
thanks for your thoughts, and i like your modification marilyn. there defo needs to be more balance between the bike and the couple. might try moving the bike myself Smile
monkeygrip 7 574 6 England
27 Aug 2009 1:42PM
I liked your first post of this shot the best and although this is still a fantastic shot the texture of the walls made me have a look at it in mono and then try the square crop because of the framing of the lines on the wall.

Stu
niamh 12 34 United Kingdom
27 Aug 2009 2:19PM
thanks for your modifications miptog and stu....like them both

would like to rebuild the wall so it has six even-sized grey squares, then position the railing, the couple, and the bike exactly where i want them....trouble is i'm not too confident this kind of thing in photoshop....but you've all inspired me to have a go
27 Aug 2009 2:57PM
Great composition, and great crop. This image really have a story ...
thewaiter Plus
14 1.2k 9 England
27 Aug 2009 3:46PM
miptog is where I was coming from .....
User_Removed 12 16 1 United Kingdom
27 Aug 2009 4:07PM
This has a lovely feel to it, the balance is just right.

di
27 Aug 2009 6:18PM
A well balanced composition. Great work.

Iain.
woodlark 12 538 1 United Kingdom
28 Aug 2009 9:29AM
To me this all proves that what you saw in the first place was the best shot, and the inclusion of the bike works. it opens a few more questions as to whats going on.

I love it, simple and effective.

Karrl
niamh 12 34 United Kingdom
28 Aug 2009 2:22PM
thanks all. like the toning on your mod richard, cheers.

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