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Charlotte

By njsmith  
Taken at Nayland, West Wales on a photography course. (Still learning).

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: lloydy, jpenguin, geoffwd and 2 more


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jpenguin 14 66
16 Oct 2005 11:12AM
hi there - the composition etc on this is ok - though may have worked better with less of the uninteresting foreground and more of the fence trailing off into the distance (easy to say when you can't see what was beyond the frame)- problem for me is the face in shdow, has left the focal point on her left hand and right show.
J

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geoffwd 14 1 United Kingdom
16 Oct 2005 11:20AM
Nice moody shot
njsmith 14 85 United Kingdom
16 Oct 2005 11:40AM
geoffwd / jpenquin

Thanks for your comments and constructive critism, all taken on board.

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