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Fireworks

By NVD

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Tooth 14 5.8k 227 Ireland
22 Mar 2011 4:16PM
NOt a bad shot and the exposure's quite good apart from a little burnout at the base of the burst. It's quite dynamic and just out of interest I've done a quick mod where I mirror-flipped and cropped away some of the dark area. I think it makes it look more dynamic, as things tend to when they read from left to right. See what you think

Stephen

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pamelajean Plus
13 1.1k 2079 United Kingdom
22 Mar 2011 7:52PM
Hello, Namita. You have done extremely well in capturing this display. I would like to have seen the tips of the highest burst within the frame, and perhaps that's something you could look out for in future, but it's very good nonetheless.
I have done a modification where I added canvas to the top and cloned in the tips of the burst, then adjusted levels, which enhances the colours and also eliminates a lot of the smoke, to give a cleaner finish. I also tried to tone down the little burnt out area that Stephen mentioned.
Pamela.
NVD 10 United Arab Emirates
1 Apr 2011 10:29PM
Hi Smile Stephen, you're right, it looks more "dynamic" when it's flipped.
Thanks for the tip, Pamela, I'll look out for that next time. I like the picture better without the added canvas, but editing it to get rid of the smoke was good.

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