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Shelle taken against a plain white paperdrop background

Tags: Fashion Portraits and people Fashion model hat highkey

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banehawi Plus
14 1.8k 3893 Canada
2 Sep 2010 6:59PM
A nice shot Paul. Exposure, skin colour are very good.

Only suggestions I have are to fame her a little lower in the frame; add a small amount of additional light on her face with a relfector; and have her smile a little, - she appears to be staring. I have done a mod, and removed on reflection form the left eye to try to reduce the staring impression. A little sharpening also.

Hope this is helpful,



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Hi Paul i agree with Willie, seeing the modification done by him its clear that now the model's face its the main focus after cropped, this is what turns a regular portrait into a eye cachting portrait.
Other thant that it is an excellent portrait work and with just a minor adjustment turned out perfect
Thanks for all your comments, taken on board what you have to say, especially the landscape over portrait, cheers all

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