Views 39 Unique 31
Vote 5
Award Shortlist   

romance

By patman
took this about a month ago at the lowry manchester, thanks for looking patman

Tags: Fashion Wedding and social Portraits and people

Voters: colmar, stephenscott, Coast and 2 more


Save 50% On Affinity Photo Today!

Comments


Coast 12 1.6k 292 United Kingdom
26 Oct 2009 4:43PM
Good location with nice colouring in the sky. Feel this might work better if couple were placed to one side of the frame and were looking out across at the view. Also the burnt out dress and waistcoat takes the eye completely and distracts from the overall image.

Still I like the feel of the shot and just feel a few tweaks would make it that much stronger.

Paul

Join ePHOTOzine for free and remove these adverts.

patman 14 1 United Kingdom
26 Oct 2009 11:04PM

Quote:Good location with nice colouring in the sky. Feel this might work better if couple were placed to one side of the frame and were looking out across at the view. Also the burnt out dress and waistcoat takes the eye completely and distracts from the overall image.

Still I like the feel of the shot and just feel a few tweaks would make it that much stronger.

Paul

thanks for your comments paul, i burnt out the dress and shirt to give like a Hollywood glow effect, i will post a different version tomorrow without the whites burnt out and a tighter crop and see what you think if you have the time thanks again paul for your comments patman

Sign In

You must be a member to leave a comment.

ePHOTOzine, the web's friendliest photography community.

Join For Free

Upload photos, chat with photographers, win prizes and much more.