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From Generation to Generation

By patrickfarrell
This is my Grandad and me. I just handed my folio in for assesment at school last friday, and this was one of my potential solutions. this is a smaller version as the original is as a large A3 format. alot of the detail is lost but i have placed both photos seperately on ephotozine. COmments welcome i really need feedback so that i can improve and continue with the thinking process. the eyes were the only thing i modified in this shot.

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: liparig, mrcal, dpemberton and 10 more


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liparig 16 233 United States
28 May 2005 9:31PM
this is a great idea and well done
Joe
mrcal 16 1.0k
29 May 2005 12:54AM
I like what you have done. I like the way the you are looking directly at the camera while Grandad is focussing somewhere else.

Perhaps there's a bit too much space to the left of your face.
dpemberton 16 25
29 May 2005 1:36AM
Excellent, good luck with the assessment
29 May 2005 9:42PM
thanks for the comments!
thorn 16 124 2 Scotland
10 Jun 2005 8:34AM
Hi Patrick,I like what you have done with the generation,your grandads eyes are great,good contact,i like the lighting and the way this portrait of you both has been taken.Good luck with your assessment.Superb composition and presentation.Take care.AnnSmile
Thankyou for your kind comments,much appreciated.
takui neko 17 849 11 Spain
18 Jun 2005 6:02AM
I like this one. The composition is very good and the gesture of both subjects fits the theme perfectly, I agree with mrcal about the space, but besides that is a well presented, well lit, well worked and most important an interesting and meaningful image.
david deveson 16 62 2 Italy
19 Jun 2005 11:36PM
Great use of composition, light and there's strength in them there eyes... personally I wish you hadn't done that to the eyes but there you go... A strong image
David
Bluke 16 303 1 United Kingdom
22 Jun 2005 6:00PM
David this is a brilliant shot ...not sure about the eyes tho. ..... It deserved more clicks ..
babs
22 Jun 2005 9:20PM
yeah, the eyes looked too dull in the orignials thats why i decided to change them.
lovelylindax 17 16
26 Jun 2005 4:38PM
I like the skin tones and I actually like the eyes xxx
ijaceone 16 2 United Kingdom
29 Jun 2005 5:57AM
NICE PICTURE
15 Jul 2005 4:46PM
great pic
15 Jul 2005 9:36PM
Thanks Johnothan for the comment!
BenF 15 14 United States
17 Jul 2005 10:03PM
I saw this picture a while ago and neglected to comment, but I found it again and I still love it.

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