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PinkK 8 80 1 United Kingdom
18 Oct 2012 4:37PM
Lovely light! Grin

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parob 6 3 74 France
18 Oct 2012 5:06PM
There is no question, you have the studio technique, it is all very appealing. You have a lovely model. Yet, something bothers me, it is the model's posture. Her body, turned as it is, seems to clash with her face. You can see what I mean by cropping just below the elbow. Here the portrait is fine. Yes, the position of the elbow is needed, but when you look closely, the shirt sticks out and the model's stomach also. Closer to the hand, see how the sleeve falls and shortens the hand (which points to the defects I noticed). To me it is a question of volume, face and black hair against the rest of the apparel. I may be too picky, you are possibly right!

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