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Through the stanchions

By pauldavey  
Taken the same night as my previously uploaded image, F16 @ 30 seconds

Tags: Landscape and travel

Voters: SisterPinkie, blondspice, oll1e


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benlee 6 46 4 United Kingdom
8 Feb 2011 1:19PM
I like the repeating patterns but I can't help feel the angle of this photo could be better; perhaps something from lower to the ground and to the right. This way the repeating pillars would go from right to left taking your eye across the photo.

I think the main sticking point for me are the leaning pillars on the left and the ceiling. The white line of the water seems in the wrong place too..

Sorry to be critical but I thought I'd share my two cents as the location is quite the winner! Lastly, I would also think about a black & white conversion?

Thoughts?

Ben

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lianna 6 13 United Kingdom
8 Feb 2011 1:27PM
I'm afraid I am going to agree with Ben above...

I love the repetitive lines... I think a square crop of the centre would make for a fantastic abstract... The repetition of the crisscross is superb...Like Ben I am struggling with the angle and the roof part... They keep drawing the eye away from what I feel is the important part of the image.!! A bw conversion I think could work also, However I quite like the rusted look.

I think this image has great potential... And I'd like to see a close crop Smile x x
8 Feb 2011 2:54PM
Superbe artistic shot. A great crop (suggested above) would make it totally perfect.

Krystal

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