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Just a bit further away from him

Camera:Canon EOS 550D
Lens:EF75-300mm f/4-5.6
Recording media:JPEG (digital)
Date Taken:21 May 2011 - 3:24 PM
Focal Length:300mm
Lens Max Aperture:f/5.7
Shutter Speed:1/125sec
Exposure Comp:0.0
Exposure Mode:Aperture-priority AE
Metering Mode:Multi-segment
Title:Hummingbird 3
Username:Paully33 Paully33
Uploaded:10 Aug 2011 - 4:43 AM
Tags:Wildlife / nature
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pamelajean Critique Team 9942 forum postspamelajean vcard United Kingdom1764 Constructive Critique Points
11 Aug 2011 - 7:41 PMConstructive Critique!This comment was flagged as constructive critique! 

I like seeing more of the environment, Paul, but what a pity the end of the bird's tail is obscured by leaves. It's better seeing the whole of the leaf shoots behind the bird, and it's a good image, but I felt the need to clone out some of the background around its head in order to achieve better definition of the bird's outline, so I have done that in my modification. I also cropped to place the bird on the left because you have it very central in the frame, adjusted highlights and levels, then selectively sharpened just the hummingbird.

Last Modified By pamelajean at 11 Aug 2011 - 7:43 PM

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