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By PCarman
i really like this shot i did at a hair stylists, its a bit different to the norm i feel and feel i captured what was wanted but haven't had any feed back , whats wrong with it ?

Tags: Photo journalism General Portraits and people Portraits and peopleandhair

Voters: dudler, ugly, bobpaige1 and 10 more


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dudler Plus
13 435 837 England
21 Jul 2014 2:27PM
I'd say the answer was "nothing" peter - you could have less space behind/more in front of the head, but I'd imagine that most hairdressers would love this as a picture of their work.

Where have you asked for feedback? I've heard from one or two people lately that just putting a shot on THAT social media site is often greeted by a storm of not-a-lot. Here, you shoudl get a little more: a lot more if you post in the Critique Gallery.

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PCarman 3 1
21 Jul 2014 2:37PM
yes I agree with u there . I was pretty pleased with it tbh detail is great etc and probably best shot of the lot u may have seen . in my opioion lol . since coming here iv leapt and with the same cam which goes to show . what iv got I feel is a good rapour with people and I feel it shows . and was very pleased to hear a model say to me shes got work with a photo I captured so everyone benifits . thanks john xxx
There's nothing wrong with it at all Pete, it's a fantastic crisp portrait. I may be being cynical but if she was topless , I am sure you would have had a lot more votes and comments..There are a lot of images to look at, some seem to stand out more than others.
PCarman 3 1
22 Jul 2014 7:59AM
sadly she wouldn't but you never know Grin xx
PCarman 3 1
23 Jul 2014 9:39PM
had some pretty good feed back today from all the pixs think everyone suddenly looked lol cheers guys xx
25 Jul 2014 12:29AM
There is only one thing that I can find, and I know I'm just as guilty as a lot of people who shoot portraits out their, and that is not having the model's eyes in focus. (in this case eye). Other than that, the lighting, framing and complete composition is bang on. The post processing is superb too I must add. You have my vote!
PCarman 3 1
25 Jul 2014 8:33AM
its been mentioned that the ear is very pretty too , actually
a very pretty ear xxx

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