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Where has the time gone...

By NDODS    
A familiar London landmark to those who have ventured this far South, which I captured in my pioneering days of Digital Photography.

Thank you for all your very open and honest comments and critiques following yesterdays upload. It is not until you ask for such critique that you realise the real standard of your work.

The sun is shining I am rather well so who knows what the day will being.

I hope that you all have a great day ahead.

Regards as always Nathan

Tags: London Landmark Tears Black and white Development Construction Passing

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SUE118 Plus
8 8 1 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 7:35AM
At first look the cranes reminded me of music notes, it makes for a very interesting image.

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Fabulous Nathan, this really inSPIRES me! Take care, winners never quit, regards, Si
25 Apr 2013 7:53AM
A fine record pic, thanks for sharing.
CarolG Plus
9 196 18 Greece
25 Apr 2013 8:03AM
An excellent capture and presentation, Nathan, have a great day Smile Carol
RonnieAG Plus
6 153 116 Scotland
25 Apr 2013 8:04AM
Not knowing London at all well, I cannot identify this spire but from the number and size of these cranes, it soon to be dwarfed by many much taller structures.
All the verticals sit comfortably together here.
Glad you are feeling well........me too but whilst you have sun, we have drizzle.
Ronnie.
andylea 7 37 1 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 8:26AM
wonderful detail super tones and comp nathan a cracker nice one Wink
andy
25 Apr 2013 8:27AM
What a lot of wonderful lines...
johnke 3 223 15
25 Apr 2013 8:29AM
Good processing Nathan. Loved the comments from you yesterday. Lovely Mono's here. I thought it was from Spider man then I realized I couldn't see him. If I had to just make a little suggestion ( don't you dare critique my plane either) It looks like you graduated the sky , but I don't think that it added to your image, that's just an observation Nathan. So happy your feeling better now go and take some photographs and enjoy the day, Regards John.
rayme330 4 17 1 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 8:37AM
Your artistic genius knows no bounds, Nathan. Grin

Ray
Hermanus 4 4 South Africa
25 Apr 2013 8:43AM
Amazing photos Nathan !! Always something different from you and I like that Smile Enjoy your day !!
franken Plus
14 4.0k 4 Wales
25 Apr 2013 8:49AM
Interesting image Nathan. I'm not the only one with cranes on my mind today! Smile

Ken
25 Apr 2013 8:53AM
live all the vertical and the angle from them makes for an interesting capture Nathan horrible today in Glasgow drab grey sky and constant drizzle good to know you feeling good make the most of the sun

GrahamGrinGrinGrin
Indeed where has the time gone.! Its flying hereBlush
Well done Nathan. WesternRed.
25 Apr 2013 9:08AM
Nice images, Nathan.

Deep
platzy 3 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 9:14AM
Nicely taken Nathan, tried to add a mod but the image is very good to start with so it's difficult to make any improvements,
morpheus1955 9 3 2 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 9:31AM
Two brilliant shots Nathan, love them both

Regards

Hugh
Like those cranes very much indeed, it's like buildings with arms doing human work adding to their
surroundings , nice shots Nathan well spotted and captured
JackAllTog Plus
7 4.4k 58 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 10:15AM
Hi Nathan,

"Critique Wanted" i prefer v2 as its like a window to the growing world.

V1 leaves my eye roaming for a point to settle on, its a little dark and the top of the spire seem lost.

Best Wishes
Stuart
25 Apr 2013 10:33AM
My goodness, Nathan, these are two oldies .... but goodies!!
I like the compositions and the presentation in mono.
I wonder what was being built and could we really have afforded it??!!
Glad you're feeling better today - have a good one.
Regards,
Richard
luckybry 6 3 Scotland
25 Apr 2013 10:38AM
excellent Nathan
sable 8 9 7 England
25 Apr 2013 10:39AM
this works so well in mono - love the composition on both images - Elizabeth xx
25 Apr 2013 10:45AM
A very busy skyline
boov Plus
3 2 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 11:48AM
Excellent too
WhiteRose1 Plus
6 1.6k 148 England
25 Apr 2013 12:02PM
Lacking a bit of contrast for me, Nathan, but some interesting and very good versions appearing. Had to try something different for mine. A painterly effect.

Dave
achieverswales 6 8 101 Wales
25 Apr 2013 12:07PM
Excellent abstracts Nathan and some great advice and mods.

Regards

Trev.
25 Apr 2013 12:11PM
At a guess the BBC building in the BG Nathan, to be honest I'm not quite clear in my own head what you were trying to do.

I thought at the thumb level it was a reflection in a puddle.

Not a critique Nathan more some questions, sorry.

Dougie
ColleenA Plus
4 319 4 Australia
25 Apr 2013 12:49PM
I always enjoy your images Nathan, glad you feeling brighter today....GrinGrinGrin
Fefe Plus
4 23 31 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 1:10PM
Great image Nathan, had to have a playWink hope you like itGrin
Diane
danbrann Plus
12 621 17
25 Apr 2013 1:20PM
Perhaps lacking a little contrast Nathan.
Nikonuser1 Plus
4 72 14 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 2:14PM
2 great mono's Nathan, well spotted and capturedSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmileSmile


Cliff
ali63 Plus
4 753 1 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 2:15PM
Great work as always,

Ali SmileSmile
Mrsbass 3 2 1 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 2:34PM
Two great images Nathan - I love the old spire in the foreground against the new build in the background. The mono works really well.
25 Apr 2013 3:01PM
Great images Nathan, both excellent.

Jenny Smile
TrevBatWCC Plus
8 12 10 England
25 Apr 2013 3:36PM
The cranes seem to be breeding! They're everywhere! Wink Even in Stuttgart, there were several on display outside my hospital room window! Smile
Trev Smile
User_Removed 6 48 1 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 3:39PM
Two superb images Nathan, yes it fly's, but when you reach 50 it takes off like a rocket.
Regards, Alf.
netta1234 Plus
4 369 2 Wales
25 Apr 2013 5:44PM
A Great set in monoSmile
NettaSmile
25 Apr 2013 6:27PM
V2 for me Nathan, and Time always seems to be moved on very quickly by a pair of Hands.

John Smile
great images really well done.

billy
chase 11 1.1k 246 England
25 Apr 2013 7:18PM
Some good strong lines on both of these images Nathan,I like the content.
Both just seem a tad under exposed though & lacking a touch of contrast which has rendered them generally quite grey,I reckon a good ole tweak of the levels & contrast would really help these two.
Some good mods for you to consider too.
jaktis Plus
12 84 Sweden
25 Apr 2013 8:12PM
V1 for me since it shows more contrasting elements

Peter
paulbroad 9 116 1057 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 8:45PM
Prefer vw, but your mono conversion is very heavy and grey with even heavier tones towards the top. Something not quite right. Might be under exposure in the first place or might be the conversion. You did use the channel mixer i hope. Almost looks like an ND grad was used, but then under exposed?

Paul
25 Apr 2013 9:15PM
Brilliant composition , Nathan !
George
Irishkate Plus
6 38 100 United Kingdom
25 Apr 2013 11:48PM
Excellent monos Nathan.
KateGrinGrinGrin
nonur Plus
7 17 11 Turkey
26 Apr 2013 1:28AM
I especially like the old fool to it.
banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3512 Canada
26 Apr 2013 1:34AM
Looks like this has a lot of historical interest for members!


It can be a sort of 1984 moody, futuristic image, or perhaps the terrific Brazil. I like Fefes mod, - shes gettinging into that end of times look.


Original looks like you used a grad, and the exposure can be evened out for a more boring mod.


Im sure nonur means "old feel"!



Regards


Willie
26 Apr 2013 6:03AM
Something very different again, Nathan! Nice "melancholy" feeling. A slow but pleasant atmosphere. Something from the 50 `s in a good sense.GrinGrinGrin --- The very best regardrs ! --- Jukka.
Glostopcat 10 255 2 England
28 Apr 2013 8:26PM
In answer to your question I really don't know, its the end of April already! It doesn't seem long since I last viewed your work but it is nearly two weeks as it has taken me so much time to catch up!Sad There are never enough hours in the day to get things done

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