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Howard2 4 2 United Kingdom
14 Oct 2019 10:59AM
This is a great portrait. Where did you find him? The setting looks natural, as does the lighting and pose and dress - I imagine he was sitting under a railway bridge somewhere when you just happen to come by toting your camera! However you got him, you got him good.

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sawsengee Plus
13 6 28 Malaysia
14 Oct 2019 11:12AM
This is a wonderful portrait & a special character profile. The lighting & portrait compo are perfect & if I have to suggest humble modifications, here are the following points I would observe:
1. the background "clean-up" can be improved especially the "ghosting" at the edge of the facial profile, so special attention & care need to be done for a cleaner edge profile;
2. the focus on the eye is a little soft as compared to the rest of the head & attire fabric;
3. the lighting on the eye zone & lower chin beard seems a little bright, so downlighting a little to recover precious details;
4. add a little more dynamic range so that the ear & hair are more visible & less contrasty;
5. a monochrome version just for a different portrait mood just to concentrate & enhance on the side profile.
Hope you like the simple mods. Again you did capture a wonderful subject & modification on an almost perfect portrait is difficult.
Best wishes. eeSmile
14 Oct 2019 12:25PM
Great portrait!

Arne
Thank you all for your very kind comments, the are all greatly appreciated.

Regards

Peter
bliba Plus
13 2 Austria
14 Oct 2019 2:00PM
great use of the avaible light - fine portrait work
14 Oct 2019 2:50PM
love it
please see mod 3 and 4
JuBarney Plus
8 33 4 United Kingdom
14 Oct 2019 4:55PM
A really handsome portrait
Ju
Thank you Ju Smile
14 Oct 2019 9:30PM
I do like this very much Peter. The composition is strong and the lighting is lovely. I find the modifications fascinating, especially sawsengee's guidance notes. If I could award this I would but I'll put it in 'favourites' so that I can go back to it - wouldn't want to lose touch with this one! SmileSmileSmile
Robert51 11 7 90 United Kingdom
15 Oct 2019 8:38AM
What a great image Peter.

I did a mod but it very much like sawsengee great mod.
You have all been generous with your advice and comments which are greatly appreciated.
Thank you very much.
Regards
Peter

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