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  • Lets Party!

    Hey guys, Thanks for the Crits - Wasn't particularly happy with this photo but was quickly running out of time to upload to the group!

    Comments are always helpful and hopefully I can improve!! Grin

    Eleanor
    • 30 Jun 2009 10:32AM
  • Young bramble shoot

    An interesting subject - I like the colour and the textures you have captured.

    I agree with what has been said above - would prefer to see the tip of the leaf and either all of the flower or none of it, the half flower head is distracting. I like how you have isolated the stalk from the background, leaving just a gentle green haze, could be a lovely image with a few cropping/compositional tweeks.

    Eleanor
    • 29 Jun 2009 2:30PM
  • Needle & Thread

    Crit Buddy:

    I love the simplicity of this, it's a nice clean image which I think would look great as a blown up print/canvas on the wall.

    Although the background 'fluff' isnt instantly noticable I think it would be better to clone it out to ensure a crisp black background, unlike lynne I like how it seems to be floating, I think it adds to the image's simplicity and sharpness.

    A very successful image!

    Eleanor
    • 29 Jun 2009 2:23PM
  • Up Close

    Crit Buddy

    Lovely image, don't have much to say I am afraid! Agree with what the others have said about the positioning, and particularly like Stella's mod - think it looks better central and closer in. Really like the DOF on this and how only the centre is actually in focus.

    Eleanor
    • 29 Jun 2009 2:09PM
  • Golden

    Crit buddy

    I really like this image, has a lovely peaceful feel to it, the colours are very chilled and compliment each other beautifully.

    The only thing I noticed was the tiny line (not sure what these are called!) coming out of the stem in the bottom left hand corner, could maybe be cloned out as is slightly distracting being the only thing in focus under the curve. Just a small niggle!

    Overall a beautiful image! Smile

    Eleanor
    • 29 Jun 2009 2:04PM
  • strawberry

    I like this image - and agree with Ian, I like the shadow on the RHS, giving it more depth. The colours pop out well against the background. I would maybe prefer this to be closer and slighlty more abstract, or taken from a different angle to add a bit more interest. Maybe to see more of the stalk against the strawberry? Just a thought.

    A nice simplistic, clean photo.

    Eleanor
    • 29 Jun 2009 1:57PM
  • Original beauty

    I love this! Smile Her eyes really draw you in and I like the angle you have photographed her at
    • 18 Mar 2009 10:36AM

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