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Look To The Right.

By Ploughman
I know this has no artistic appeal and is of poor composition but, people looking at my pictures, even those not aircraft minded pause and look at this with interest.
So, what do you think ?

Tags: General Transport Sports and action

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banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3492 Canada
11 Nov 2012 8:01PM
It really is about what you think about it Richard, and if you like it or not,

What you will get here is comments on focal points, composition, content, etc. some of which youve already mentioned in the description. I cant figure out the Title and its connection to the image.

Me as an example, - I dont like the exaggerated distorted car top right, but I can certainly see some people saying thats "cool"!

I am drawn to engines, the exhausts, their size, the size of the wing, with the background holding no interest, - even being distracting.

So I might take whats interesting for me, and make it fill the frame, or perhaps an abstract part of the plane, and try that.

Loaded a mod as an example.

regards


Willie

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Ploughman 3 28 3 United Kingdom
11 Nov 2012 8:36PM
Thanks Willie, I had not noticed the distortion of the car. Just goes to show that some of us only see what we want to see, for me it is the new exhaust stacks closest to the camera. Notice how shiny they are compared to the ones on the far engine. I like your idea of cropping to show closely the bit that is interesting to you.
The title, ` Look To The Right` refers to the view from the cockpit on the right side.

Richard.
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3492 Canada
11 Nov 2012 10:30PM
Ah, - get it. And perhaps it was the new pipes that attracted me to that area.


Willie
paulbroad 9 114 1045 United Kingdom
12 Nov 2012 8:00PM
The distorted background pulls the eye terribly, but I am an aircraft fan, particularly WW2 types, and this viewpoint is not the best for me. Parts of two Merlin exhausts and a wing.

Paul

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