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South Gare - Seaweed

By pmphotography
I went to see what South Gare (Redcar) had to offer. Answer; a lovely beach with a nice sunrise over the headland. The whole area offers such a diverse scope for photography.
Please feel free to comment. Cheers

Tags: Landscape and travel

Comments


Debs_Rocker 13 303 2 United Kingdom
20 Jan 2010 11:02AM
very pleasing image, quite tranquil. Nice colours and vey simple which often works best! Well done
MikeEG 15 10 United Kingdom
20 Jan 2010 11:03AM
Well taken and presented beach and sunrise, Love it well done.
Mike
andy_AHG 13 106 6 United Kingdom
20 Jan 2010 11:26AM
That's a grand shot. Only vague crit I could make is to be closer in on the seaweed. Not sure if that would make much of an improvement as it's a lovely image.

Andy
BrianSS 15 418 41 England
20 Jan 2010 12:29PM
A super image, such a simple composition but it works extremely well.
20 Jan 2010 2:00PM
Thanks for the comments.

Andy - fair point, next time I'm out I'll remember to bend my back!!

Cheers
Paul
paulbroad Plus
14 131 1293 United Kingdom
20 Jan 2010 5:17PM
Grad helps this very simple composition. Good crop to square and restful - the type of shot often seen in furniture stores.

Paul
malc_c 15 2 167 England
20 Jan 2010 5:17PM
Nice shot, I agree with Andy about coming in closer on the seaweed.

The shot might also benefit from a TINY amount of fill flash to just bring out a touch of colour in the 'weed. Or you could take one shot with flash and one without and blend them as delicately as you wish in photoshop.

I've sort-of simulated the effect of both of these in a mod - just as an illustration.

malcolm
DaveMead 12 23 14 United Kingdom
20 Jan 2010 6:35PM
Beautiful.
Dave
20 Jan 2010 9:28PM
Great feedback guys.

Malc_c - Yep I've definitely taken that comment on board regarding getting a bit lower down to the key focal foreground subject.

Cheers
Paul
NEWMANP 13 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
24 Jan 2010 5:39PM
nice this, i like the banding effect and semi abstract nature.its a subjective thing but im not at all worried about the position of the seaweed or the proximity to it. for me the composition works quite well and i love the gold stripe running across the top/mid area.

i wonder if its a little dark and gloomy overall, and i think it might bounce a little more life into things with a brightening up. you could try lifting the mid tones and then a little tight s curve and maybe a little dodging on the highlights particually in the mid distance. additionally i would also suggest a crop of some of the dark grey area from the sky.

this is a really nice image and few tweaks would make it even stronger,
best regards
Phil

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