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By possumhead
This was outside my window at a hotel in Saville.

Tags: General Architecture Saville

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Great picture only thing I can say is maybe a little too much green contrast, but then again I'm no expert.


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Lou_C 11 755 2 England
9 Sep 2007 2:18PM
I think theres a little to much green, perhaps the other colours could do with a bit of a pop in PS. And its a shame you cut off the front of the fountain
Carabosse 15 41.0k 269 England
9 Sep 2007 4:26PM
I think the problem here is that there is a slight blue colour cast which makes the greens look unnatural. Also there is a lack of contrast and sharpness and the photo is slightly skewed... needs levelling.
accystan 13 132 6 Canada
12 Sep 2007 5:13PM
I can only echo the previous comments. It needs rotating slightly, a boost in contrast and warming up by adding some red in p/s or similar. Compositionally it might have been improved if the fountain formed a more dominant part of the whole frame - became a feature. Right now there is no dominant focal point.

Just my opinion.

Dave D

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