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By the lake bw

By Rafaela
Black and white version
May be darker in some monitors...

Tags: Portrait Light White Black General The And Natural Lake By Girl Black and white B and w Bandw Portraits and people W and b W/b

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claret 17 49 England
14 Nov 2007 8:23AM
Don't normally comment on shots in the Critique gallery as I'm not sure I'm qualified but hear are my non-technical ramblings. Toning looks perfect on my monitor. Not sure the composition works - the cut off arm and the slope of the model down to the right are a bit off putting. The text, although subdued, is a slight distraction.
Iain
Rafaela 14 3 Brazil
14 Nov 2007 6:22PM

Quote:Don't normally comment on shots in the Critique gallery as I'm not sure I'm qualified but hear are my non-technical ramblings. Toning looks perfect on my monitor. Not sure the composition works - the cut off arm and the slope of the model down to the right are a bit off putting. The text, although subdued, is a slight distraction.
Iain


thanks for the critique! Grin
i have to agree about the arm it bothers me too and the text is a little watermark the original doesnt have it Grin

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