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Smile from Kampoong

By Rarindra
It was early morning when I arrived at Bogor, a small city near to Jakarta. A girl look at me and give a sweet smile.

Tags: Village Indonesia Smile Portraits and people Kampoong

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Daisymaye Plus
9 23 16 Canada
6 Jul 2011 2:48PM

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pdove 8 22 United Kingdom
6 Jul 2011 3:19PM
Love the lighting and composition. Would perhaps crop or clone out the curved highlight on extreme right but at that I am being a bit 'picky'. Regards, Phil
rontear Plus
15 8 8 England
6 Jul 2011 4:25PM
Expressive. Ron.
HectorRivera 10 17 1 United States
6 Jul 2011 6:13PM
Beautiful, love the smile, light and general compo. However, I have to agree with Phil and Frank. A tighter crop, eliminatign the curved object and moving the watermark bellow would heve been better.

Alandyv8 7 2 1
6 Jul 2011 6:18PM
Beatiful shot, but I would definitely crop some off the right hand side,

Dave_Holdham 9 4 1 Wales
6 Jul 2011 7:31PM
Very nice, like the colours and beautiful lighting, would have enjoyed more without the distracting copyright banner, which is my only gripe,
derekhansen Plus
9 210 24 United Kingdom
6 Jul 2011 11:11PM
Beautiful light and a lovely portrait.
avacreates 6 448 1 United Kingdom
6 Jun 2012 1:50PM
Absolutely beautiful photo, I think you could get an award for it without the logo on their faces and a slight crop to the right - well done

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