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Lindsey Machettie

By RavenTepes
Model is Lindsey Machettie of the Gothique Barbies.

Photography and colour editing is my own work.

Tags: Nude and glamour

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

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NickParry 11 1.0k 79 Wales
6 Sep 2009 1:21PM
First thing to look at here is the composition. She needs to be left of frame rather than right of frame, as that is the direction she is looking.

It is lacking a little sharpness in places too, and although images do not necessarily need to be pin sharp, the features of the model would be enhanced with little sharpness.

The selective colour works ok in these types of images, although the vibrancy of the hairs colour could be brought out more.

I hope you find these comments constructive.

Nick Smile

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