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Skies Above

By RavenTepes
This was taken in Kenai, Alaska, my home town.

Tags: Landscape and travel

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.

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10 Jul 2009 9:44PM
Gorgeous sky,brilliant image Smile
Jemma

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Morgs 8 20 62 Wales
11 Jul 2009 11:51AM
This is a lovely sky, but that is about it I guess. There is nothing in the foreground to hold the eye. I appreciate that it was probably very dark too, but perhaps you could have used neutral density graduated filters that would have allowed you to focus on a subject in the foreground whilst at the same time using that great sky to hold the whole shot together.

Another style you could have used would be to silhouette something. The building to the left (which acts as a distraction) is an example of what could have been achieved. Perhaps a person standing there, or some other object could be used to stand out as a silhouette against that great sky.

Hope this all helps.

David
dennypoos 7 6 1 United Kingdom
11 Jul 2009 1:59PM
I'm with David on this. There's nothing to give a focal point for the eye to alight upon, with the possible exception of the slightly intusive streetlight. Great dramatic sky though and one I'd use as a background layer at a future date.

Dennis.
RavenTepes 7 226 United States
11 Jul 2009 9:31PM
Thank you for the comments. I'll deffinitely keep that in mind the next time I come across a shot like this.

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