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Alda 6 70 30 United Kingdom
2 Aug 2013 6:21PM
This could be a lovely image, but as it is, it doesn't work for me. The grey of her forehead clashes with the colour in the rest of her face, and some of her fingers are colour popped while others aren't. IMHO you should have only popped the flower and left the rest mono, or popped her whole face, and not just a part of it. No offence intended, otherwise it's a lovely image and a beautiful model.

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retec 13 England
2 Aug 2013 7:35PM
Thank you for taking the trouble to comment. Yes I agree with your comment about the forehead, I've been trying to sort that out, but without any success. It was intended to be as if the flower was emitting some light itself ( hence the title, ' multiple light source' ),and trying to work out where this light would fall. For example, how a buttercup lights up the underside of a persons chin in yellow. I wasn't trying to colour pop as such. But thank you for your comment, and definitely no offence taken. I will continue to work on it until I feel I can convey the idea that's in my head.

Thanks again

Peter
KDC 7 12 6 United Kingdom
2 Aug 2013 7:51PM
Very good idea, I like it. If you allow modifications and let me know, I would love to try and get the effect you are after. Wink
retec 13 England
2 Aug 2013 8:31PM
Just worked out how to allow modifications, would love to see your results, thanks for the offer.

Peter
KDC 7 12 6 United Kingdom
3 Aug 2013 1:56PM

Quote:Just worked out how to allow modifications, would love to see your results, thanks for the offer.

Peter



On it's way, thanks. Wink
Keith.
retec 13 England
5 Aug 2013 10:26AM
Thanks Keith for the mod, I Like it, tried something on similar lines, but I like this one better.

Peter

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