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The Mill

By rick9449  
The site of the Constable painting

Tags: Landscape and travel Millstream

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10 2.5k 82 United Kingdom
3 Apr 2010 3:50PM
Lovely tranquil scene, that I feel needs a few small adjustments to bring it alive, so I've created a mod. of my version...see thumbnail above.....regards..Nn.

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Thanks for that Nik, I am in my first year of photography and any critique is welcome
DRicherby 11 269 726 United Kingdom
6 Apr 2010 12:42PM
This is a pretty scene but, for me, the photo doesn't really have a compositional focus so my eye just wanders around it without knowing where to settle. The mill itself feels like it ought to be the `subject' of the photograph but it's rather in the background and obscured by those two trees so it doesn't hold the attention.

There are several articles on composition on ePhotozine and elsewhere on the web. Patricia Fenn's article is a good place to start; searching for `composition' will give you lots more.

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