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Hand In Hand

By rjheat
Nice couple going to get some Pier Fries at Old Orchard Beach, Maine,
we were going there also!

Tags: Black and white

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puertouk 4 1.1k 17 United Kingdom
9 May 2012 2:28PM
Nice image, but a little too bright. I've also cropped the image, as it's the couple you are trying to concentrate on, not everything else going on to the left. With the crop, the image concentrates on the couple, rather than the eye wandering off to other parts. I made some adjustment in Photoshop, with a levels adjustment and brightness and contrast, which I feel brings the image out a little better. Hope you like it.
Stephen

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mhfore 9 6 176 England
9 May 2012 3:18PM
Hi,

There's a couple of simple adjustments that could be done to alter the image slightly as it appears a little soft.

If you look at the side of the building on the left you will see the image need a slight rotation to the right to level. Then for my eye's the midtones need adjusting, this is easily by goinig to "Levels" and moving the middle pointer to the right untill you get it right for your eye.

Good image of Maine Lighouse in your pf.

Take care
Martin
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3426 Canada
9 May 2012 3:24PM
Youve captured a nice moment here. They could also be heading off to that Motel too!


The mono is a good approach, though does appear a little bright and low in contrast. Might have been due to the conversion process perhaps?

The shot is a little tilted judging from the siding, so a little straightening is done in the mod. Theres a lot of width that can be cropped, especially from the left.


Ive loaded two mods, both cropped and straightened, the first is a straight mono with highlights toned down; the second is a duo toned version which I think suits this.



Hope this helps,



Regards



Willie
rjheat 5 United States
9 May 2012 3:29PM
Thank you, puertouk, mhfore,banehawi, for taking your time to adjust and commenting on the photo....thank you very much!!! have an AWESOME day!!!
banehawi Plus
12 1.4k 3426 Canada
9 May 2012 6:01PM
Thanks I forgot to actually upload the mods, - they are there now.



Willie
rjheat 5 United States
9 May 2012 8:48PM
Thank you Willie very nice I will have to learn PP some-time
rjheat 5 United States
9 May 2012 8:51PM
And Thank you puertouk,mhfore,banehawi..all of the adjustment look awesome SmileSmile
rjheat 5 United States
10 May 2012 10:37AM
Thank You very much Focus_Man very useful information....I had just gotten out of my truck and seen them walking so it was a quick short...not thinking to much about anything other then take the Pic.....didn't want to lose the moment you know.....again thank you very much.... SmileSmileSmile

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