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nonur 12 18 13 Turkey
7 Jan 2014 7:37AM
Natural and so nice portrait work.
NDODS 11 5.2k 127 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2014 7:51AM
Love the styling, love the pose, beautiful model, however I do feel that the lighting is somewhat harsh. This is particularly evident on the models nose and forehead, this might be due to to higher a setting on your modelling lamp.

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin
barbarahirst 13 27 12 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2014 9:04AM
So colourful .... lovely to see
7 Jan 2014 10:13AM
I love this Robert, she is so pretty and the hat a bit cheeky too GrinGrin
A Booth 19 11 4 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2014 11:28AM
colourful nicely posed model captured with good lighting and detail.
hobbo Plus
10 1.7k 4 England
7 Jan 2014 11:51AM
For me?

Photographic Perfection........Inspirational!

Hobbo
Joline Plus
15 37 59 United States
7 Jan 2014 12:41PM
This could be right out of the 1950's. Well done.
Maiwand 14 3 73 England
7 Jan 2014 1:14PM
Superb portrait Robert. Excellent use of lighting.GrinGrinGrinGrinGrinGrin
Ron
7 Jan 2014 6:04PM
A beautiful portrait and colour.
Brian65 12 2 United Kingdom
7 Jan 2014 7:10PM
Cracking portrait Robert.
Brian
banehawi Plus
17 2.5k 4268 Canada
7 Jan 2014 8:52PM
Ive downloaded this for a closer look. Theres something about it thats not quite right. I like the model and the pose in general. I also wanted to check her face and exposure in general.

So what I notice is that the colour saturation is very high; Ive applied a -20 ti the saturation adjustment, and the sweater, which is almost glowing, becomes closer to what you would expect.

This did help somewhat. I narrowed it down to her left hand; it appears very large, seems about the same size as her face, and is taking attention away from her pretty face. Theres sort of best practice with hands close to the face that suggests the hand should be seen only side on, for this reason. I think the overall image would look better with a change of the left hand position.

Theres a very strong red line under her chin caused by reflected light from the sweater, and I would suggest de saturating this area a little, even after an overall desauration. More light from the front might have helped out here by reducing the shadow.

Something to try the next time.


Hope this is helpful,



regards


Willie
ddolfelin Plus
9 103 3 Wales
8 Jan 2014 7:04AM
A brilliant shot - love the colours.

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