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By RodJames
I'm still trying to take decent portraits. Please let me have your thoughts on this.

I like the shot very much, especially the natural lighting and crop.

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: deltafour, pfheyes, headskiesfly and 11 more


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pfheyes 16 254 1 United Kingdom
5 Aug 2004 10:16AM
Works for me!

Pete

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mrcal 16 1.0k
5 Aug 2004 10:32AM
I like the shot a lot. The natural lighting, the sharp eyes with the great catchlight, the way the hair fills the corners all add up up to a good picture.

On the technical side, and these are only minor considerations to tweak an already good image, you might burn in a little on the side of the nose as the highlight is just starting to lose detail. The shadow on the bridge of the nose and left eye is a little distracting; some light dodging could help that.
geegee 16 29 England
5 Aug 2004 11:21AM
A lovely natural portrait, I like the soft tones.
Click.

George.
RodJames 16 21 United Kingdom
5 Aug 2004 12:27PM
Pete, Michael and George - thank you all for your comments. Thanks for the technical tips Mike. It's strange, I hadn't noticed the shadow until you mentioned it. I'll play around with it some more. Thanks again.

Rod
stevie 16 1.2k 2 United Kingdom
5 Aug 2004 12:50PM
I'm by no means a good portrait photographer but I really like this shot. I think the detail is good, I like the crop and the model looks natural and relaxed. Click from me.
5 Aug 2004 12:55PM
Excellent portrait Rod, very relaxed pose with lovely lighting, good work.

Mary
inkarts 16 61 2
5 Aug 2004 2:14PM
Going in the right direction. Appealing image. John
5 Aug 2004 2:16PM
Lovely pose and great crop. Love the way the hair fills the corners
RodJames 16 21 United Kingdom
5 Aug 2004 2:21PM
Steve, Mary, John and Dennis - thanks very much for looking. Your comments are much appreciated.

Rod
deltafour 16 13
5 Aug 2004 3:39PM
you have produced a lovely portrait.I like the crop,and lighting.
click
Stewart
davidbailie 16 457 7 United Kingdom
5 Aug 2004 5:26PM
I like it Rod - my only thought's are those which I would give to myself - the light is coming more from below than above which gives it a slightly unnatural/unusual feel - the long shadow thrown by the nose I would work against - do you have some reflector to the models left? - the lighting is nice and gentle

It's a pleasant shot of a pleasant person Smile

Dave
6 Aug 2004 6:33AM
Lovely portrait Rod, works for me, love her hair.
Richard
RodJames 16 21 United Kingdom
6 Aug 2004 10:07AM
Stewart, Dave and Richard - thank you for your comments.

Dave - I did use a relector to the left but I see what you mean about the shadow. It's amazing how I don't see these things but that's why these comments are so useful - thanks again.

Rod
magda_indigo 16 418 England
7 Aug 2004 6:38PM
NICE LIGHT, BUT DON'LET IT GET TOO DRAMATIC, FROM TOO LOW, GOOD EXPRESSION AND COMP, click (*:*)
RodJames 16 21 United Kingdom
8 Aug 2004 12:23PM
I'll keep it mind Magda and I'll keep trying. Thanks for you help.

Rod
gwynann 16 72 United Kingdom
8 Aug 2004 12:46PM
Works really well Rod, lighting and crop spot on, click
Gwyn
RodJames 16 21 United Kingdom
8 Aug 2004 4:39PM
Thanks very much Gwyn.

Rod
magda_indigo 16 418 England
8 Aug 2004 5:05PM
forgot to click I just saw!! SOOOO, click (*:*)
RodJames 16 21 United Kingdom
8 Aug 2004 5:25PM
Thanks for the click Magda.

Rod
keithh 16 25.7k 33 Wallis And Futuna
18 Aug 2004 9:41PM
I like the work on this, would have prefered the light a shade softer but well worth experimenting further.
click
RodJames 16 21 United Kingdom
19 Aug 2004 7:20AM
Thanks Keith

Rod

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