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By RSaraiva
Had this idea for an abstract and was wondering what you think.

Back lighting is natural light. Side lighting is flash.

Tags: Specialist and abstract Close-up and macro Flash and lighting

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bweaver 13 2
24 Sep 2006 5:20PM
Owner of this photo wants to improve and uploaded it to our critique gallery. Please be constructive with your comments
I think this image would be more suited to Still-life/Tabletop photography. If you want abstract then you need to go in a lot closer. For example look at the stripes on the second bottle from left-look at the way the light is making patterns in the orange bottle beside. The picture as it is is too regimental with everything in a straight line. Try laying down one bottle.
Hope this is helpful.

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culturedcanvas 14 4.7k 59 United Kingdom
24 Sep 2006 6:59PM
Hi, i quite like this image as a commercial shot .. the fact that it is regimented doesnt bother me personally ...

what does grate with me is the red border and the large writing .. i think i could live with the red border if it was a bit thinner .. but the huge writing and font take away from what is otherwise a classy shot ...

TopsyTopping 13 51 United Kingdom
27 Sep 2006 8:19PM
I like the red it makes it a more dramatic shot, excellent work!

I would agree why not try a macro shot too!

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