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Owner of this photo wants to improve and uploaded it to our critique gallery. Please be constructive with your comments
I think this image would be more suited to Still-life/Tabletop photography. If you want abstract then you need to go in a lot closer. For example look at the stripes on the second bottle from left-look at the way the light is making patterns in the orange bottle beside. The picture as it is is too regimental with everything in a straight line. Try laying down one bottle.
Hope this is helpful.
Barry
I think this image would be more suited to Still-life/Tabletop photography. If you want abstract then you need to go in a lot closer. For example look at the stripes on the second bottle from left-look at the way the light is making patterns in the orange bottle beside. The picture as it is is too regimental with everything in a straight line. Try laying down one bottle.
Hope this is helpful.
Barry
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Hi, i quite like this image as a commercial shot .. the fact that it is regimented doesnt bother me personally ...
what does grate with me is the red border and the large writing .. i think i could live with the red border if it was a bit thinner .. but the huge writing and font take away from what is otherwise a classy shot ...
Dan
what does grate with me is the red border and the large writing .. i think i could live with the red border if it was a bit thinner .. but the huge writing and font take away from what is otherwise a classy shot ...
Dan
I like the red it makes it a more dramatic shot, excellent work!
I would agree why not try a macro shot too!
Topsy
I would agree why not try a macro shot too!
Topsy
