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my first wedding shoot

By RWPhotoGraphix  
my first go of this wedding business, i have done a lot better since but would love an opinion on this picture as it was my first attempt!

Tags: Wedding Fashion Black and white Close-up and macro Wedding and social Ring Portraits and people

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gossyboy 11 460 United Kingdom
5 Oct 2008 9:54PM
Really nicely done!!

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Fisher2 12 1 Ireland
5 Oct 2008 10:03PM
I never seen that done before, well spotted, looks good to me.
Dessy
mars 12 England
5 Oct 2008 10:28PM
Beautiful....

M
5 Oct 2008 11:09PM
Lovely picture - what a great idea - very symbolic.
j-rho 15 25
6 Oct 2008 12:13AM
Nicely executed idea, would make a great cover photo for an album or a wedding card.

The heavy border is a real distraction though, and I think unnecessary as the photo would carry it off without it.
gary_d 12 576 13 Wales
6 Oct 2008 1:24AM
I have to do my first wedding on Saturday and hope you don't mind if I try something like this as its a great idea. - gary
pamelajean Plus
13 1.2k 2096 United Kingdom
6 Oct 2008 7:23PM
Hello, Ryan. You carried out this technique perfectly. I wonder if it could be a little lighter, though, and perhaps toned, because it looks a bit dark, especially considering it is a wedding photo. I might also suggest a little more blurring around the edges. There are some excellent examples of this on the site, you might like to do a search for them.
Pamela.
EllieEdge 12 15 42 Norway
6 Oct 2008 7:38PM
Fantastic idea with the shade of the ring forming a heart. One thing that struck me: Since this is a wedding shot I would expect the ring to be brand new. To me it looks old and scratched. I don't know if it actually IS an old ring, like for example using a grandparens ring. Or a pattern. But I would expect it to be very new, polished and shining.
- Ellie
richard20d 10 115 10
6 Apr 2009 10:11AM
The idea came out of a camera mag.
EmzLou1980 10 279 Scotland
13 May 2009 7:24PM
damn great idea, loving the shadow, great chose of book and words , nice ring btw
13 May 2009 8:26PM

Quote:The idea came out of a camera mag.


so what if it is? surely you have followed a tutorial at some point!!
like i state i am a begginer in photography so why cant i try things i havent done before!!
thanks to everyone else who left nice comments! it means a lot to me!! Smile
13 May 2009 8:28PM
and besides the idea was in a mag but the ring was on a dictionary, i thought of a better image by using the bible on a section about love! so really it was partly my idea!!
13 May 2009 8:28PM
so put that in your pipe and smoke it lol Tongue
cassiecat 11 39 46 England
13 May 2009 8:32PM
what does it matter where the ideas and inspiration come from, its good to try new things and techniques in order to improve.
I wouldnt be brave enough to try a wedding.lesley

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