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By salopian
Recent defence budget cuts seem to have caused the RAF to recommission some of it's older aircraftSmile
Bristol Boxkite at Shuttleworth Collection Autumn Air Show

Tags: General Defence Boxkite

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iancrowson Plus
6 211 142 United Kingdom
13 Oct 2012 12:41PM
Super image, you could clone out the red object/light on the left as it does not add anything and distracts a little.
Ian

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banehawi Plus
12 1.5k 3554 Canada
13 Oct 2012 3:21PM
A nice shot, and an amusing observation. Good exposure, quite sharp, interesting subject.

Could be improved a little with more room on the right and top, and the contrast/colours given a little pop, - I know the weather wasnt the best.

Take a look at the mod and see what you think.


regards


Willie
Sooty_1 6 1.5k 220 United Kingdom
13 Oct 2012 3:47PM
I agree that a little contrast lift and colour tweak helps, but the proportions of the composition are fine. The mod looks like its crammed in the corner.

I'd be interested to see this flipped horizontally, for aesthetic purposes.

Nick
Focus_Man 6 481 631 United Kingdom
14 Oct 2012 10:44AM
I was looking for Wilbur & Orville!

I agree with the above comments and appreciate that this is just a smart observation on your part.

Frank
salopian Plus
5 2 21 United Kingdom
15 Oct 2012 10:23AM
Thanks for the comments and suggestions. The colour pop improves the pic but emphasises the red and white object even more, so it does need to be cloned out as Ian says.
There were four pre WW1 aircraft flying as it was a calm, still late afternoon and these aircraft can only be flown under these conditions.

Geoff
paulbroad 9 117 1074 United Kingdom
15 Oct 2012 7:38PM
Fine record with required cloning. More dramatic, closer with wide angle but doubtless impossible and then not a record either.

Paul

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