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mrswoolybill Plus
11 1.2k 1929 United Kingdom
23 Feb 2014 9:43AM
Welcome back, we've been thinking about you, hope your visit went well.

There's a story in this, a youngster suspended in mid air, leaping forward. Except that she's heading leftwards, which suggests the past, memory. She takes me back to my own childhood. I suspect that flipping horizontally would give a more upbeat but less emotive effect.

I could live with a tighter crop here, for clean simplicity of composition. Get rid of the strip of rock at the top - OK it's context but it makes the frame oppressively top-heavy and it draws my eye away from the child. And get rid of the rock on the left.

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23 Feb 2014 9:53AM
A picture that has many possibility's Malc, & I really like the one you've chosen here.

saltireblue Plus
8 8.0k 33 Norway
23 Feb 2014 9:55AM
Damn! I forgot about that boulder. I removed it in another version, but forget it in this one...
I like the feel of her jumping to the left more than to the right for some reason. Looks more natural to my eye.

Yes, the week was marvellous - will mail you later.

cats_123 Plus
14 4.8k 28 Northern Ireland
23 Feb 2014 9:55AM
Great Timing Smile
franken Plus
15 4.6k 4 United Kingdom
23 Feb 2014 9:58AM
Brilliantly timed image here Malc.

RonnieAG Plus
8 154 118 Scotland
23 Feb 2014 10:37AM
Moira's comments are always so interesting and instructive, I feel: and a lovely shot of this young lass obviously enjoying her own company on the beach.
And of course so well timed too.
woolybill1 Plus
11 23 72 United Kingdom
23 Feb 2014 12:18PM
Welcome back, Malc. You have been missed!
Nikonuser1 Plus
5 152 16 United Kingdom
23 Feb 2014 12:44PM
Great mono capture Malc, nice to see you backSmile

rontear Plus
15 8 8 England
23 Feb 2014 12:59PM
Fun image Malcolm.
TrevBatWCC Plus
9 12 12 England
23 Feb 2014 2:09PM
Welcome back, Malc, hope you enjoyed your visit Smile A great shot, but agree with Moira, and think her mods work well Wink
Trev Smile
mikbee 11 3 8 Scotland
23 Feb 2014 2:22PM
So you have decided to grace us with your presence then Malc !!
I have perhaps forgotten my wallet or keys in the past,
but how the Hell can you forget about a half ton boulder ?
Good to see you back mate !!
PranavMishra 5 52 17 India
23 Feb 2014 2:29PM
fine capture..
Rende 11 38 4 Netherlands
23 Feb 2014 2:33PM
Lovely composition and beautifully captured dynamic pose Malc.
Maybe you need a bridge camera too Wink
NDODS 7 5.1k 125 United Kingdom
23 Feb 2014 2:36PM
One small leap, one giant step...

Regards Nathan GrinGrinGrin
saltireblue Plus
8 8.0k 33 Norway
23 Feb 2014 2:40PM

Maybe you need a bridge camera too Wink

Touché Smile
Jasper87 Plus
8 2.0k 150 England
23 Feb 2014 5:28PM
Have to say she doesn't look like she's going to make it Grin Like your processing and Moira's crop, the shingle looks like water and gives an element of danger.

jasonrwl Plus
8 1.1k 10 United Kingdom
23 Feb 2014 6:52PM
Works well Malc - hope you have had a good visit
barbarahirst 9 27 12 United Kingdom
23 Feb 2014 6:58PM
Long time no see
Back with a belter
danbrann Plus
13 637 17
23 Feb 2014 7:49PM
Combining good action with superb composition. Not always easy Malcolm.
24 Feb 2014 11:05AM
She seems to be dancing from stone to stone, like a little fairy.

24 Feb 2014 5:29PM
Timed this shot to perfection.

24 Feb 2014 6:36PM
I'd clone out that daft looking lump on the shingle, top left, but leave it alone otherwise.
And I like the strip of rock along the top...for me it's important, I find the image rather bare and unwelcoming otherwise.
It's a good photograph, so just let it be.

Richsr 11 91 223 England
26 Feb 2014 8:27AM
A small jump or giant leap, well timed Malc
Regards Richard
nonur Plus
9 17 13 Turkey
2 Mar 2014 8:51AM
A lovely mono.

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