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Nabs 13 India
10 Jul 2008 1:30PM
Nice composition.
debster 17 693 3 England
10 Jul 2008 2:21PM
I see where you were trying to go with this and you've made a good start.

I hope you don't mind some input - if you do, just ignore me!! It's just that I'm trying to give back some of the help I received when I started out Smile

Firstly, you need to straighten the horizon - a MUST with landscape photography. Simple enough to do but shout if you need a hand. Secondly, the sky is a burnt out in places and so you've lost a lot of detail in the cloud - the use of a graduated filter would have helped to balance the exposure and thus retain detail. Finally, it needs a little sharpen in PS.

PLEASE don't be deterred by this - take a look at my first images and you'll see I was rubbish when I started out. Take everything you can from this site and you'll soon see huge improvements.

Debbie
NEWMANP 13 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
10 Jul 2008 3:11PM
nicley put Debster, i was about to offer the same advise.
Phil
there are ways to recover the sky with mutipied layers but thats for later, move on and upwards, new pictures and underexpose a touch in camera and you can tweak bits back in most programs, but if you overexpose skys etc its very hard to pull them back after,
Phil
sandy22 13 England
17 Jul 2008 10:25PM
many thanks for all comments, i can now see the the faults and hope to improve in time to the standards that i have seen and the encouragement from all.
sandy 22

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