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By sawdust
One Of Danielle from the shoot I did. Danielle as not been a model before and I'm quite new to it so we are learning together all comments are welcome as we need to learn.

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: woolybill1, TonyFrith, 110_TURNER and 9 more

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cameracat 16 8.6k 61 Norfolk Island
2 Jul 2008 7:29PM
Guess you have to start somewhere.....!

Your model is doing well for her first time, However the pose looks a little uncomfortable, Not relaxed or natural, I'm not sure if it's the angle or maybe just first time nerves....!

A good start though.....Smile

Now I'm guessing your not going to be suprised, When I pass comment on the backdrop, It really spolis the whole image, Overall it appears to have been made worse by post processing....!

Areas that need attention, Background, Lighting, Less processing.

Had a quick look at your web site, Seems you have the same background problem going on in many shots, As well as some colour cast issues, If your serious about offering Wedding services, You might want to reconsider your web gallery standards....!

Now I know that all seems a tad harsh, But believe me, It's just an honest appraisal, I do hope you benefit from it...!
TonyFrith 13 3 6 United Kingdom
2 Jul 2008 7:39PM
as above the model does not look relaxed but for the first try its good
sawdust 14 72
2 Jul 2008 7:42PM
Some times the truth hurts just like having a tooth out but you feel better after thanks for the Critique I will print it out and try to improve thank you .
gerrymac 13 10 1 United Kingdom
15 Aug 2008 9:26PM
Like the model and her outfit,like the old wild west.....a very good effort...

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