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debu 10 India
17 May 2012 10:52AM
Lovely image and model.
debu

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Richsr 13 91 223 England
17 May 2012 11:00AM
Looks a good location and nice light too.
For me a slight crop in from the RHS to remove the bright area of window would help as at the moment it takes your eye there and away from the subject
Regards Richard
saxy 12 Slovenia
17 May 2012 11:04AM
Thank you, Debu and Richard. That's a constructive critique Wink
Kind regards.
softlight 10 1 United Kingdom
17 May 2012 11:19AM
I do like the picture, the problems I have with this picture are the second window the bright mirror the open crockery box and my eyecatchers the mobile phone on the tabletop. If it was your intention to have a room set the second window needed to be heavily muted this would have helped with the mirror reflexion also the table needed to the clearing. Myself I would have chosen to use a 85 mm lens turned a round 90 with the attractive young lady taking up 50% of the picture I hope this helps Mike.
saxy 12 Slovenia
17 May 2012 11:24AM
A mobile phone on the table?? Yup, modern ladies Tongue Another constructive ... thanks again!
Regards
tonyguitar Plus
8 77 37 Canada
17 May 2012 6:39PM
Cellphone on the table? What about the silverware in the case? Boyfriend is taking the photo but soon they will both leave, taking the family silverware, phone and anything else of value. [My nutty imagination..]

Remove all that complex stuff on the right. A right side vertical crop through the silverware case would improve this entertaining image and bring our pretty gal closer, where she belongs. TG

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