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By SharonJ
Another one of my daughter this time in a different pose.

Tags: Portraits and people

Voters: xanda, robway, cavegirl


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xanda Plus
18 244 2 United Kingdom
11 Mar 2005 7:44AM
I like this. I like the composition and the pose. I don't know if there is any way you can raise the contast between what the model is wearing and the chair because the two do blend to some extent but I like it as it is. It would be worth shooting several like this with your daughter wearing different things. It drew my attention so CLICK.
robway 17 318 Wales
11 Mar 2005 10:15AM
Agree with above. I also think it would look good if it was cropped to show head,shoulders and hands. Click !
John
SharonJ 17 61 United Kingdom
11 Mar 2005 10:48AM
Thanks Xanda and Robway for commenting and for the suggestions.
griffin 18 68
17 Apr 2006 2:28AM
I think the problem here is the background. The two different colours on wall are distracting but the dark clothes on the dark chair make make it all rather dark at the bottom. you could try just a small table chair and a lighter plainer background. As said above a crop would get rid of a lot of the empty space. Not a bad attempt.
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