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Graduation

By SierraGulf1  
Hey Everyone

This is a photo of my Fiancee Gillie on her graduation as a childrens nurse.

I really like this photo and i think its one of the best i have done.

I would like your takes on this picture and any comments or modifications you would make to it to make it any better!

Thanks! Hope everyones well Smile

Tags: Portraits and people

Comments


User_Removed 19 2.8k 11 United Kingdom
7 Jul 2010 8:20PM
Adam. Good idea but it's screaming out for some fill in flash on Gillie's face to lighten it up a little.

Steinbeck.
banehawi Plus
17 2.6k 4281 Canada
7 Jul 2010 8:38PM
Its is a tad too dark where you need it to be bright, and this is due to the presence of the sky in the shot.

Including the skyline, and Big Ben was a good idea, but when you do this, you need to force your flash to be on so you brighten the closer subject.

Ive loaded a mod where Ive simply emulated the effect of flash on the face which gives you the idea how it would look.

Ive brightened some eye shadows and added a couple of small catch lights too.


Hope this is helpful,


Regards


Willie
Paintman Plus
15 1.5k 180 United Kingdom
7 Jul 2010 9:11PM
I think the figure needs lightening and the Big Ben tower needs straightening, both of which the mod shows. Some colour can be introduced with the saturation tool/panel. Selective sharpening helps bring out the pertinent details.

Alan.
Paul Morgan 20 19.5k 6 England
7 Jul 2010 9:11PM
Firstly congrats to your girlfriend on her graduation Smile

Fill light could have made a big difference, I always use flash as a last resort and tend to use natural available reflective surfaces ie white walls, glass or water to bounce a little fill light if available.

Something else worth knowing is that renting out the mortar board and gown is pretty expensive for just a few hours use. Paying out just a few extra quid gives you a whole week to play around.
paulbroad Plus
14 131 1293 United Kingdom
8 Jul 2010 8:04AM
The idea and composition is excellent, but you needed that flash fill. Always try both, a few with flash, a few without. You would not get the exposure correct as exposing for her face would over expose the background, and for most people, flash fill is the obvious answer.

Try letting the camera sort it out, they often do it well. Yours, I think, is a bridge camera by Fuji - I had one years ago and it managed fill flash well. The danger is that it might over expose the figure.

Point the central focusing square at your girlfriend, half press the shutter button to set focus AND FLASH - keeping the shutter button half pressed so as not to loose the settings - re-compose and shoot.

Paul
banehawi Plus
17 2.6k 4281 Canada
8 Jul 2010 1:51PM
I stand corrected Focus_Man!


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