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25 Oct 2006 6:18AM
I think this is excelent work. a job well done.

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25 Oct 2006 6:46AM
I was instantly drawn to this photo. It's difficult to fault. Nicely done
Skatershrew 13 52 1 England
25 Oct 2006 7:11AM
Yeah brilliant shot, really like the framing/composition of it.
Colours are dull but in a good way, gives the shot atmosphere.
Focus and all that tech stuff is spot on too.
Welcome to epz and I look forward to seeing more of your work!
whipspeed Plus
13 4.2k 22 United Kingdom
25 Oct 2006 10:52AM
Excellent shot, like the toning you've done to it as well. If I had to critique one thing, it would be the lettering on the top, I think it would work better as plain black.
I look forward to seeing more of your work.

joolsb 13 27.1k 38 Switzerland
25 Oct 2006 10:52AM
Can see this as album cover art - it has that sort of nmoodiness about it.

Only improvement I'd make to this excellent image would be to crop just above the fingers. This part of the shot is brighter than the rest and tends to divert attention from the subject.
JohnJo 12 145 United Kingdom
25 Oct 2006 10:54AM
M, ultra gothic and you have the look for it. Subject is just right without being in your face. Moody, inquisitive, what looks like a hint of leather and zipage. Goth nails, strand of white hair, good makeup and subdued tones. I can almost feel the angst from here.

One thing, I am slightly distracted by what looks like lettering on your clothing. I’m asking myself “what does it say” when I should be looking elsewhere.
msnapz 11 74
25 Oct 2006 11:44AM
A really top notch picture. It stood out as a thumbnail so i had to click to see. There is so much atmosphere in this and there isnt anything to fault apart from what others have said about the lettering on your top.I'd probably agree with the comment about the fingers too, the toning is excellent, cant wait to see more of your work
JohnH37 11 1 United Kingdom
26 Oct 2006 7:05AM
Beautiful photo.Great composition.
ktcam 12 457 Scotland
27 Oct 2006 7:29AM
I agree about the fingers too but I have to say this is a really moody and interesting shot. Beautifull. Looking forward to seeing more of your work Smile
mikesavage 15 299 2 England
28 Oct 2006 12:09AM
Cool tones, very delicate.

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