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War of the worlds v.2

By simonshere  
I uploaded the first version of this last time - please take a look. I've done alot more work on it since, but still feel it needs more done to it before its finished. Any advice will be gratefully received, and if you want to upload a 'tweaked' version then, please do, on the first version page...

Tags: Tripod Model General War Field Battle Run Specialist and abstract Digitally manipulated Running Laser Martian Brunnette Heat ray

Voters: t_downes, pamelajean,

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pamelajean Plus
15 1.7k 2242 United Kingdom
12 Apr 2010 2:12PM
This is coming along nicely, and I can see the work you have done on it. Wow! I like the girl with her mouth open, I would have expected someone screaming so am pleased with that. I see you have turned one of the twins blonde and removed the waist sash, and that works well. You have enhanced the lasers and given them some diagonals. I have to say that my eye immediately rested on the cross and the laser going across it, very clever. It may be a lot busier overall, but the action is all there, as well as the atmosphere. The shadows have made a difference. I can't think of much else that needs doing to it. My only slight niggle is that the girl on the left is quite "pale" in comparison to the other people, and she's the only one that still looks "stuck on". Also, her shadow isn't very prominent.
12 Apr 2010 3:40PM
Thanks Pamela,
Still working on this, but will adjust the girl on the left to fit in better.
thanks for your advice once again and will submit another version once I've played around with it a bit more...

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