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Venus & the waxing Moon

By SiPickles    
Tried to concentrate more on composition with this one. what do people think??

Tags: General Black and white Specialist and abstract Landscape and travel Wildlife and nature

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Jocelia Plus
5 2 1 Australia
6 Jan 2012 12:44AM
"The moon was a ghostly gallion tossed upon cloudy seas". Good one…….Jocelia….

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6 Jan 2012 4:18AM
I got a meteor trail in the next frame. Apparently its been really good for them in the UK last few days. Only spotted it while editing. Can only upload one a day tho!!! Thanks for commenting.
pamelajean Plus
10 969 1834 United Kingdom
6 Jan 2012 4:40PM
You are building up quite an eclectic portfolio, Simon. I suppose this would be of interest to astronomers or the like, but I know very little about this wonderful subject, even though I once went to classes on it. So I will deal more with your composition. I like the way you have chosen the silhouetted tree to set off your subjects, and the aura around the moon. The format is probably the best one you could have chosen. The moon is nicely placed in top top right of the frame, but you might consider cropping a bit from the bottom in order to bring the elements together more. There isn't much more I can say.
paulbroad 9 116 1064 United Kingdom
6 Jan 2012 8:03PM
What to say. This is very specialist and I have no doubt it does what you wanted. The problem for general viewing is that specialist nature.


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