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Wet Path

By sluggyboy

Tags: Wildlife and nature

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This photo is here for critique. Please only comment constructively and with suggestions on how to improve it.


NEWMANP 9 1.6k 574 United Kingdom
16 Oct 2012 9:57PM
well you didnt add much information above on which to base a critique however despite being an unusual choice of subject it does have some nice light, good use of perspective etc. technically its pretty well handled and i actually rather like the light on the tussocks of grass

it just seems a little like a set without an actor. no principle subject on which to rest the viewers eye.
so after the initial appreciation of the light, im left wondering what you were trying to say with the image.


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Focus_Man 7 481 631 United Kingdom
17 Oct 2012 11:06AM
Please describe your photo here.
Do you want critique? Tell us what you are trying to achieve or what sort of advice you are looking for. It's also useful to provide as much EXIF data for the photo (see below).

This info was for your guidance not for you to print!

For me this is just a path, nice lighting but really needs a focal point, as is said on a regular basis on the critique that you see on other similar uploads. If you don't then it would be a good idea to look at similar uploads and read the comments appended.

I am aware that it is often the case that people will not wish to walk on such slippers surfaces to create an interest for you so there is your conundrum.

iancrowson Plus
7 211 146 United Kingdom
17 Oct 2012 1:50PM
I like this image. In my view a path can be a subject in it's self. There is always something of a mystery about a path or road, where does if lead, who passed this way etc. My father won a major photo competition with a not too dissimilar photo.
Good lighting, technique etc,
paulbroad 10 123 1195 United Kingdom
17 Oct 2012 5:47PM
It's not a bad image at all, but the regulars know what's coming next. For ME, it screams for a small figure, or even just a dog well to the back of the path. The path needs to lead to something.


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