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Strawberry 1

By Sone  
Taken with macro filters. Some editing done on adobe photoshop touch. Taken only with black cloth as background a spoon for the strawberry to res on and there you go ! Any advice ?

Tags: General Close-up and macro

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banehawi Plus
11 1.3k 3354 Canada
4 Sep 2013 2:06PM
The idea is nice.

The shot is underexposed though, and looks a lot more vibrant with this sorted out. I cant tell from your shot details how metering worked, or the shot settings.

The black background has visible lighter areas. You may have tried to paint these in with black, but theres still some areas missed, - so its worthwhile adding a few more touch ups to the background. Its possible, and its a guess, that you underexposed it either when shooting (no details) or in photoshop to darken the background, and ended up underexposing the strawberry?

Anyway, mod loaded to show what I mean. View large.

Havent seen you on here for a while, so welcome back.



regards



Willie

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paulbroad 8 108 988 United Kingdom
5 Sep 2013 8:42AM
No info. A good idea but you are quite a bit under exposed making the strawberry dark and not very apertising. You should really see this as soon as you view the image. Just brighten it up for a much better effect.

Paul

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